Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?
Some individuals hold the opinion that the public cost of
health
care and education
should be paid by the governments. It is argued that if it is the responsibility of the authorities. I think that it is governments'
obligation because the states should protect people's Suggestion
government's
safety
in physical and mental.
A country should protect citizens' physical safety
. For the external aspects, the government has an army to protect its border in order to stop the threaten from the other countries. Similarly
, for the internal aspects, a state should protect its people to defend the threaten from the deseases
. an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
For example
, the UK's government has National Health
System to protect its residents' health
, and recently, in Asia, many countries are suffering
Coronavirus, Chinese and Japanese governments issue the policy for free of charging for people who gets the Suggestion
have been suffering
have suffered
desease
.
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
In addition
, the authorities
response the people's mental Suggestion
authorities'
safety
. Education
in an important way to build people's mental health
in a long term. Humans are more peaceful, friendly and knowledgeable compared with their ancesters
in the someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
thounds
years ago. the cardinal number that is the product of 10 and 100
thousand
thousands
This
is because morden
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
education
system nurtures people who has more these elements in heart
rather than people have more merits than their Suggestion
the heart
ancesters
naturally. someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
For instance
, in the countries who have excellent average qualities of minor's education
(according the rank of PISA) often have very low crime rate, Suggestion
educated
such
as Singapore, China, Japan, etc.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that paying for health
care and education
for citizens is the responsibility of a government, because it should protect its people's physical and mental safety
. It will be interesting to see that if some countries would be accepted this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite