The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The
bar-chart
illustrates the proportion of Correct your spelling
bar chart
households
who
owned and rented Correct pronoun usage
that
accommodation
in two countries from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the percentage
of households
in owned accommodation
grew over the entire period with the exception at the end
, while
there was a considerable drop in the percentage
of households
who hired accommodation
. Although
experiencing different figures in
the whole, both of them were exactly equal in 1971.
More people could afford to purchase Change preposition
on
a
private Correct article usage
apply
accommodation
t O live year by year, despite starting as much less proportion in 1918 at well above 20%. The figure levelled off between 1939 and 1953 at just above 30% before increasing remarkably in upcoming
4 years by roughly 35%. Correct article usage
the upcoming
However
, there was a considerable drop from just under 70% to about 65% at the end
of the given period, although
it reached its trough in 2001.
As for the households
who rented accommodation
, in spite of undergoing the highest percentage
in
the beginning of the period, the figure decreased considerably from well under 80 % to just under 70% between 1918 and 1939. Change the preposition
at
Following
this
., the percentage
of the
Correct article usage
apply
households
in rented accommodation
witnessed a remarkable decline, after stabilizing from 1939 to 1953, within a 52-year-period
by Correct your spelling
52-year period
approximate
40% by hitting its low before increasing to just above 35% in 2011.Change the word
approximately
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