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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is believed by some people that students should pay heed to all the subjects at school
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, many other perceives that only those subjects of one’s interest should be focused upon by the children. In my opinion, basic knowledge of all the subjects is
necessity
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a necessity
 before university
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 and
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, all the streams should be studied well.
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 with, exposure of a child to different topics not only leads to
wholistic development
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the holistic development
holistic development
 of a child, but
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 assists in decision-making
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in
 the right field for the career.
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, a teenager should have sound knowledge about every
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 which develops cognitive skills and contributes to
overall growth
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the overall growth
 of mind. Suppose a student wants to be an engineer and he focuses
on only science
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only on science
 but
not ignores
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doesn't ignore
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English
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, it would be difficult for him to survive in today’s world in
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 epoch of globalization.
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, it is difficult to decide the appropriate
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 unless one has worked upon that. On the other side, getting biased towards the
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 in which a student scores excellent can make one carve the niche. If a student is performing well in a
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, he/she should practice more
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on
 that particular
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 to attain expertise and seek some associated career
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. Numerous examples can be seen in television industry where a child actor focuses more on dramatics alongside regular study. It clearly shows that emphasizing on a single
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 of choice can prove fruitful. To conclude,
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 giving more attention to the
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 of interest can bring laurels, kids should consider maintaining equilibrium among all the subjects at school
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 and be
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specifically
 at
university
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the university level
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 after deciding upon the
subject
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 in which they want to master.
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