During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear
Mr.
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John, I'm writing
this
letter to follow up on
job
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a job
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vacancy at any of your
chain
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chains
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of restaurants. I'm Sathish and I had
a
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opportunity to travel with you from Chennai to Vancouver on Emirates Airlines,
last
Friday. It was wonderful of you to suggest
me
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to
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reach out to you regarding any job opening at one of your branches. With the help of your business card that I received from you, I found you had a vacancy for
Restaurant
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the Restaurant
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Manager post at
Vancouver
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the Vancouver
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branch through your website. As I already mentioned about my education background in Masters of Business Administration and
two year
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experience as
a
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Assistant Manager at Restaurant Industry, I would like you to consider to provide me
an
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appointment for an interview. Since I'm very confident, with my experience, I can assure you that you will find me elevating the quality and business of that particular branch. Looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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