A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words.

Dear John, Hope you are doing good.
Last
month I have received your letter in which your were
enquired
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enquiring
about a
job
in my company. So I am writing
this
letter, because I have heard about a
job
opening in a local company and I personally feel that
this
job
would be suitable
job
for you. As far as
job
profile concern,
job
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the job
require
Suggestion
requires
some analysis on big data and preparing the report based on
such
analysis. As much I know, you have good analytical skills and can prepare
attractive report
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an attractive report
attractive reports
. As you have obtained
diploma
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a diploma
in same field
last
year. If you
are find
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find
are finding
this
job
interesting,
then
you can apply by sending filed application from along with
photocopy
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a photocopy
of your educational documents. For your ready reference I have attached application form as an
annexure
an addition that extends a main building
annexe
of
this
letter. If you require any information about
this
job
profile or company,
then
please contact
my
objective form of "I"
me
over email. Yours friend Rahul

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