A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words.

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Dear John, Hope you are doing good.

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month I have received your letter in which

your

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were enquired about a

job

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in my company. So I am writing

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letter

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apply

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because I have heard about a

job

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opening in a local company and I personally feel that

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job

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would be

suitable

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job

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for you. As far as

job

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profile concern,

job

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require

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some analysis on big data and preparing the report based on

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analysis. As much I know, you have good analytical skills and can prepare

attractive

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an attractive

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report

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. As you have obtained

diploma

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a diploma

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same

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the same

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field

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year. If you

are find

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job

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interesting,

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you can apply by sending

filed

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application

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from

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along with

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of your educational documents. For your ready

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I have attached

application

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form as an annexure of

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letter. If you require any information about

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job

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profile or company,

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please contact

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over email.

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friend Rahul

Sun Mar 15 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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reputation
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duties and responsibilities
typical day
skills and experiences
job requirements
company culture
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work ethic
application process
job listing
submit an application
documents required
tailored resume
cover letter
relevant experiences
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