A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words.

Dear John, Hope you are doing good.
Last
month I have received your letter in which
your
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you
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were enquired about a
job
in my company. So I am writing
this
letter
,
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apply
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because I have heard about a
job
opening in a local company and I personally feel that
this
job
would be
suitable
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a suitable
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job
for you. As far as
job
profile concern,
job
require
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some analysis on big data and preparing the report based on
such
analysis. As much I know, you have good analytical skills and can prepare
attractive
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an attractive
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report
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. As you have obtained
diploma
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in
same
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the same
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field
last
year. If you
are find
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this
job
interesting,
then
you can apply by sending
filed
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application
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from
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form
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along with
photocopy
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a photocopy
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of your educational documents. For your ready
reference
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,reference
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I have attached
application
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the application
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form as an annexure of
this
letter. If you require any information about
this
job
profile or company,
then
please contact
my
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over email.
Yours
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friend Rahul

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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