Some business observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seem to lack interpersonal skills needed for communication with their colleagues. What could be the reason for this? What solution can help address this problem?
After completing graduation, joining a company as an employee is really a new journey of life for everyone. It is not abnormal for someone to feel uncomfortable in a new and at the same time
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among freshers is not a great problem and it can be solved.
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among freshers, which are necessary for interactions with their colleagues. Firstly
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Task Response
Provide a more in-depth exploration of the reasons behind the lack of interpersonal skills among freshers and how it affects their interaction in the workplace. Use specific examples and details to support your ideas.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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