The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The given tables provide
sales
information on coffee
and bananas
which had Fairtrade labels attached to them and coffee
and bananas
had been sold in five different European countries
over 5 years
, 1990
to 2004. The Change preposition
from 1990
sales
price is given in millions of Euros
and the fair trade coffee
and bananas
indicate that the farmers who produced these products are from developing countries
and have been paid a decent price for their production.
Overall
, UK
was the largest Correct article usage
the UK
market
in faritrade
labelled Correct your spelling
fairtrade
fair trade
coffee
, while
Switzerland
was the biggest market
of
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for
bananas
.
As the table data demonstrates Switzerland
was the largest market
of
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for
coffee
in 1999 which was around 3 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
even though in 2004 UK
was 20 Correct article usage
the UK
million
of
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apply
euros
in
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on
coffee
while
in Switzerland
was around 6 million
of
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apply
euros
. Belgium and Sweden had the same pattern of coffee
over 5 years
, 1million
of Correct your spelling
1 million
euros
increased to 1.7 million
of
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apply
euros
, 0.8
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and 0.8
million
of
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apply
euros
went up to 1 million
of
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apply
euros
respectively. Although
Denmark becomes double in 2004 which was
started at 1.8 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
of
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apply
euros
. According to the
table clearly say that Change preposition
The
sales
of coffee
have been
increased in five Unnecessary verb
apply
countries
over both 2 years
.
For the
banana Correct article usage
apply
sale
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,sale
Switzerland
was the largest sale market
in both years
also
sales
amount of Correct article usage
the sales
banana
was higher than Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
sales
amount of Correct article usage
the sales
coffee
. In Belgium
the Add a comma
,Belgium
sales
amount was increased in 2004 which were
started
at 0.6 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
million
of
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apply
euros
. Other countries
, Sweden, Denmark even UK were
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
the
sale in 2004.Correct article usage
apply
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