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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree?

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As time goes by, new sorts of products
apeare
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
appear
appeared
 each day
in
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at
 the same time with new advertisements.
However
, the average of the
solding
a short stretch of railroad track used to store rolling stock or enable trains on the same line to pass
siding
 products
increases according
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increases, according
 to what people
nead
require as useful, just, or proper
need
. I completely disagree with those who say that the average of the sales increase due to the strong advertisements behind them. There are several
reasonse
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reasons e
 why the high sales of popular consumer goods depend on the need of people.
First
 of all, any
product
 in the world will not be sold as long as it
dose
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
 not have any beneficial effects, because no one want to
west
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westernize
 his money on something useless.
In other words
, most of the people think twice
befor
earlier in time; previously
before
 buying any new thing and
mesure
determine the measurements of something or somebody, take measurements of
measure
measures
measured
 the amount of benefits they can gain from it.
For example
, if a new phone has been
develobed
lowered in value
devalued
 with lots of strong advertisement shows the most important features it has, people will not buy it until they read about its all characteristics and
anderstand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
understands
 its features. Another important reason is that, all of the people can directly recognise that the
product
 is mostly useless when its advertisement is so strong, because most of the companies always try to sale its all
product
 so if any of them have not been sold
then
 they will start make
strong advertisement
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a strong advertisement
 in order to
attracte
direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attract
 the society.
Moreover
, most of the people get bored due to the number of advertisements they see daily so they usually ignore any
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
 appears
infront
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in front
 of them. In conclusion,
although
 most of the companies spend
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
 of money for advertising,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think that
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
 they were strong, the high sales of any good is only depend on the need of the society and whether they have found the
product
 beneficial or not.
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