The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 is estimated that over on third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?

Falling the

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means the more people dies the less people are born.

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a big matter for many developed countries in recent years.

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can have many effects on economic and social lives.

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want to mention the positive effects of the matter of falling the

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. When the total

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of a country decreases, controlling people may be easier. The budget dedicated to each person will be raised and people can live in comfort. People can get better and more services because of less

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. Providing more security is one of the other advantages of

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matter has its own disadvantages, certainly. As I mentioned in

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paragraph falling

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means more people dies less people are born.

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reduces the young

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in a country, so

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of work forces decrease. All we know that the best work forces are the young. The retired people must be paid by retirement salary and

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can be an extra cost

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the government when the elders can’t give services and there’s not

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young people to replace. In some developed countries the solitary will get problems. The person who goes to solitary must be young and when the young

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decrease

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decreases

the solitary can’t be provided and supported. Without the young

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a society can be destroyed.

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conclusion, I will give some solutions to deal with

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situation. The main solution is making a balance between

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the birth rate

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and death

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.

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can be done with teaching the couples to give

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to more children. Giving properties and supports make the parents sure to do

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. And another solution is expanding migration opportunities for young people from other countries. There are lots of young people in undeveloped countries who want to migrate.