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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The chart illustrates UK graduate and postgraduate
students
 who did
jobs
such
 as
part time
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part-time
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 work, voluntary work,
further
 subject,
unemployment
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and unemployment
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,
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apply
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 after
finished
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finishing
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they
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their
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 University studies in 2008.
Overall
, the highest number of
students
 shows in
further
 study in both bachelor's and postgraduate
students
,
while
 the lowest number of
students
 joined for voluntary work.
Although
 both types of
students
 show a fluctuating pattern
in
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apply
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over the year.
According to
 the chart, 17735
of
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apply
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graduate
students
 did
part time
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part-time
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jobs
,
while
 only 3500
students
 did voluntary
jobs
.
Although
 the largest figure of
students
 did
further
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the further
a further
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 course, which was around 29665 out of 30000.
Moreover
, only 16235 of the
students
 were unemployments in companies. It clearly seems that graduates sharply fell in voluntary
works
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work
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, but
this
 trend dramatically increased in
further
 research. The highest number of postgraduate
students
shows
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shown
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 in
further
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the further
a further
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 inquiry
which
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apply
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is nearly 200
students
 higher than
who
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those who
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 did
part time
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part-time
show examples
 works. The lowest statistic of
students
 shows
in
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apply
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voluntary
works
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work
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 as the trend
of
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for
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the graduate student.
However
,
students
 1625 out of 3000 did unemployment
jobs
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, further, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, jobs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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