the line chart below shows the amount of three types of fast food consumed in England from 1970 to 1900

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consumption

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of three different

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kind

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of fast

food

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, namely:

hamburger

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,

fish

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&

chips

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and

pizza

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in England between 1970 to 1990.

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, the

amount

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of

fish

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&

chips

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and

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hamburger

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experienced an uptrend with the

consumption

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of

fish

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&

chips

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was the highest and the following was

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hamburger

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.

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, the

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of

pizza

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consumed had a

down trend

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, and it was

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kind

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the kind

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of fast

food

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with the lowest

consumption

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.

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the beginning, the quantity of

pizza

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consumed to 300

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,

then

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it went down gradually to 200

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in 1985. There was an

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slowly by 10

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between 1985 to 1990, and it became

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kind

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a kind

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of fast

food

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with the lowest

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. From 1970 to 1980, there was a rise moderately in the

amount

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of

fish

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&

chips

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from 80

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to 150

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, after

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it climbed dramatically and reach it was peak

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500

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in over

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ten

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between 1980 to 1990. It stood

at

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the first

kind

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of fast

food

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consumed. The quantity of

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hamburger

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consumed to 20

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in 1970,

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subsequently

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it grew slightly over 100

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by 1985. There was a significant drop in the

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of

pizza

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from 110

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to 290

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of wheat from 1985 to 2990, and it had the

second

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of

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fast

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consumed.