‘For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.’ How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view?

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for a child’s early education is important for all Parents and educators, and music can certainly claim to be a key possibility when deciding which Abilities to teach.

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, I feel that playing music is actually less important than basic

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, and I will explain the reasons here.

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, it seems simplistic to say that the soul is paramount ‘for all

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.’ Certainly, there Are some

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who are highly talented or have

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interest in tune, and when we think of Childhood prodigies

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as Beethoven or Yehudi Menuhin we see how

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talent can be brought out.

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,

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talents are rare, and even the enjoyment and cultural values to be gained from learning Melody cannot genuinely be compared to the benefits of becoming literate.

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is a guarantee of academic progress and the absorption of information

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playing rap Does not offer

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security.

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, it would be unimaginable to transmit scientific or Mathematical information to

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via the medium of soul.

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, it is surely wiser to regard Rap as one of a wide range of secondary skills, ranking below

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and sitting alongside sports, Hobbies, foreign languages and other important but less essential activities. Of course, those who say that highly talented

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must be allowed to develop their talents Are quite correct; it is equally true, though, that few

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seem to possess a musical ability to the

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that it should be prioritised so highly for all pupils. In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the potential benefits of learning to play Soul for a minority of

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, and it should certainly be available as an option.

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, if we Think of all

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in a given community,

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appears to be a far stronger pathway to progress And independence.