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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity ,improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that compulsory services like charity
,
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,
 teaching to young
student
 and cleaning
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
 should be mandatory
(
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(
compulsory) in the high school
,
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,
 I strongly agree with that because it not only helps to connect with other people easier but
also
 shaping their personality. I think it is a good idea
to
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of
 sending
student
 for
charity
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charitable
 works, these are
help
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helping
 them to know how it is difficult to earn
money
also
 that make them to learn a job and how to save
money
 and time
,
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,
for instance
 in my university
,
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,
they
are offer
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offer
are offering
are offered
 a chance to
being
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be
 a teacher assistant as a voluntary job.I
excepted
generally approved or compelling recognition
accepted
 the job and taught me not how should I save my
money
 and time
also
 caused to increase my confidence in my interview and presentation, after two years I feel responsible to how should I save my
money
. In other hand voluntary or compulsory work activities
maybe
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may be
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 hurt
student
 like
make
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to make
making
 fun of by the other
student
,
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,
 car accident and stop them to maintain
studies
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studies, for
for
example they
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example, they
 have to clean their
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
 if their friends see them when they are cleaning
,
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,
it
is take
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is taking
has taken
is taken
takes
 a bad effect on their personality and maybe they will not want to these
activity
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activities
 again. In my conclusion, compulsory community services have a good feedback on
student
,
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,
these are helps to
shaping
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shape
 personality and
such
 services will be to develop a better society and better
student
 in the future, I hope
this
 idea will be put into action.
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