The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

There are two charts about
land
degradation
. The pie chart shows the primary causes of
land
degradation
around the world, the other which is a table shows the effects these causes have in three continents during the 1990s. There are three main reasons that make
land
used in agricultural activity become less arable between 1990-1999: over-grazing (raising too many livestocks), over-cultivation (growing too many crops), and deforestation (destroying forest). If we look into the places or continents where is most affected, it is Europe, following are Oceania which placed Australia and North America. According to the pie chart, the leading cause of
land
degradation
in the 1990s
is raising
Suggestion
was raising
too many livestocks which
accounts
Suggestion
account
for 35 percent. Deforestation is the
second
-most leading cause which accounts for about one-
third
or 30 percent. Over-cultivation followed up with 28 percent.
Furthermore
, according to the table, we can see that Europe was the most affected continent in both from deforestation and over-cultivation, resulting in
highest
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higher
total
land
degradation
. Oceania,
however
, despite no
land
degraded from over-cultivation, it suffered the heaviest damage from over-grazing. North America took a
smallest
Suggestion
small
smaller
hit from each cause and total
land
degradation
.

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