Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workes deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

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standar

a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

standard

age

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of

retirement

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(65

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) is considered unfair for certain

demographis

of or relating to demography

demographics

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of society, because they think that some workers have the right to retire and receive a pension at an earlier

age

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, I don’t agree with that, for the reason that I feel that the health has had several

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advances

in the

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two decades.

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, a person with is 65 years still looks like very good and they can be a great contribution

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the workplace. Nowadays, population in

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developing

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countries is majority elder.

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, governments spend many resources

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support the health of

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group of individuals. The

retirement

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is not always a good option for people that

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have spent

their entire life in a workplace, rather

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situation could create more

pyschological

mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature

psychological

problems. In fact, the end of a labour era, cause in some cases depressions,

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do not know

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does not know

what doing with their time, because their life was the job. In my opinion, all kinds of

workes

buildings for carrying on industrial labor

works

workers

, independent of their gender, ought have the same

retirement

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.

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, currently in Chile, the individuals that belong to

army

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the army

have earlier pension.

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situation is unfair, because I consider that

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of jobs do not have a great contribution

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to

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society.

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case is the women, they in

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country finish their labour world with 60 years, which is not fair, because nowadays we fight for the

equallity

the quality of being the same in quantity or measure or value or status

equality

quality

for men and women, so the fair is that everyone would have their pension at the same

age

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. In conclusion, a group of the population

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considers

that the

age

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of

retirement

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should be different for some works, though that I do not agree for the reason that the work is part essential of the one person, so if decrease the

age

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, probably, would be a problem for the government and perhaps for our health.