Write about the following topic: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn.In your opinion what are the most important aspects of a job? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

In my view, choosing a

profession

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and

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the job is

most important

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more important

for people. Once graduated

in

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from

high school, every student should

be to choose their

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choose to be their

profession

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. Most of them,

live

have a great affection or liking for

love

to do relevant professional work. But

profession

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choosing depends on salary will take. I want to write about using an aspect of the Mongolian situation.

Modern days,

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In modern days,

everyone does not choose to universities to study and to become a

profession

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.

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example

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example, last

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year, So many people chose a college,

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Mongolian universities became a low national exam point that enters universities because of

students

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the students

. They are choosing a college, course and another one

to earn

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earn

more

money

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. Some people choose to founding new business and production. Private businesses can find more

money

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than public servants in Mongolia. At that moment in Mongolia, to earn more

money

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, they go abroad as Korea, Japan and etc.

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, a Korean visa is so difficult to take Mongolian people. So that people who have already a high professional go abroad to earn

money

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. It is so sad situation in our lives and it affects badly to country development. For people, they

are lost

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are losing

have lost

lose

their health and

living not

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lives, not

lives not

close to their family. Another aspect is to choose the most valuable

profession

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and university. The best students just can access university and become a brand as a doctor, economist, etc. The high salary enhances their living quality. When they get a higher paying job,

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may lead to their having more

money

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to support their families and encouraging their children to pursue higher education.