You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir/ Madam, Here I am writing
mail
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to enquiry about the washing machine . Indeed, I am looking for a Samsung automatic washing tool 7
kg
. Most of the electronic shops do not have
7
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kg
gadget for Samsung and
available
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only 10
kg
. Perhaps, we are a small family and I do not require
the
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big size appliance.
Thus
, could you please let me know if your shop has the exact item as per my requirement? Or else, I am wondering that if
you
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possible to make the order from your head office. With regards to the prices, I am requesting you to provide me
the
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rates for both 7
kg
and 10
kg
washing
machine
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.
In addition
, may I know any monsoon discount will be applied to the final bill as I am a member card holder from your shop?
Lastly
, if a washing machine is available, I will come down to your shop by
next
week.
Currently
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I am in Mandalay for a family trip and will be back
to
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Yangon by
next
Monday. So, I am requesting you to reserve the thing for me and may I know the time frame as well as how long will you manage to hold the item. Thanks in advance for your
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and I look forward to hearing from you soon. With Regards, Ivy

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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