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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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It is considered that Customs
are made
Suggestion
was made
were made
 in the past and Modernization is meant for the future. And we should break our traditional values in order to modify our lives. I completely disagree with
this
 opinion that deviating from our own culture could not help in our progress.
First
 of all, I believe that our rituals would destroy our lives. Because traditions are made for us to live a sophisticated
life
.
For instance
, recently from
last
 three months we are facing a
life
 threatening disease Covid-19 due to the consumption of unhealthy food, the virus got originated in humans, and it is spreading world widely by hand shaking as it was adapted by foreign countries. In our culture introduction is started by joining palms together in front of chest. If people in our country would follow our own way of wishing style
,
Accept space
,
then
 it could not spread too much in our India.
This
 happened because of putting our customs aside.
Hence
 our beliefs protects our lives.
Secondly
, Tradition contributes a sense of comfort and belonging. It brings families together to celebrate occasions and to memorise the people who had lost and died off. It teaches the individual how to improve the quality of
life
, what food to consume. It
also
 develops a positive attitude in human beings. Traditions Not only maintains physical health, but
also
 maintains psychological well being of each individual. It reinforces good education
,
Accept space
,
freedom, faith, personal responsibilities. It offers, to say "Thank you"for the contribution that someone has made. Traditions are the backbone of our country. To summarize, I strongly believe that traditions would make our
life
 healthier as well as wealthier whereas innovations would make our lives easier. To grow in
life
 we should not forget our traditions. Your progress

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