The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Might be the best way for solution issues with traffic congestion if a government provides permanent and free-of-charge community transports. Inasmuch as, the population of people has been growing rapidly with a tendency of buying a car for each person to easier get to a

place destination

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destination place

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, for the time being, issues with road congestions are becoming deeper and broader.

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, for the time being have been growing quantity of car

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a level of pollution,

noisy

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noise

and car crashes that lead to a more dangerous life in the future.

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, if develop new and more friendly for

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environmental

public

transport

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, it is will be solution plenty of problems. Inasmuch as a government and transportation companies can adjust

schedule

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schedules

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transport

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it is could lead

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a diminishing level of noise, especially at night.

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, implementation of public

transport

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could in the future give us more a predictable chance to get to

point

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the point

of destination.

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, today’s rules in the underground there you know when a

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train arrives, so you can predict time for a trip. In spite of

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the fact

that people today have different statuses and habits that somehow will be

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hindered

for collaborate of using

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shared

transport

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, society should accept inevitable implementation of public

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for

everybody

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every body

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, a government via deference among sectors of the population should adjust using one

transport

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on the one itinerary for everybody without any difference among consumers.

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, among all positives almost lost one tiny, but important detail: free-of-charge means to spend money from a public

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contract one's lips into a rounded shape

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that increases pressure on it.

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, not all countries around the world can

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allow

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result people

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result, people

could get or bad service or leave without any

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. In conclusion, I think an idea with public

transport

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excellent and can solve many problems not only with congestion.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

People argue that children spend their leisure time differently than it was before, and the main reason fir this is new devises.

Too much emphasis is placed on going university for academic education. People should be encouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?