Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects .Other people think t ,in today's world,subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It

is

certaily

definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')

certainly

true that

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an integrated course of academic studies

curriculum

has always been a focus of everyone's concern.

Although

some people believe that

history

is a significant

subject

to teach students, others think science and

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

have more significance as compared to

history

.In my opinion, for well

rounderd

curving and somewhat round in shape rather than jagged

rounded

developmet

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

historyis

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history is

cannot be neglected, it is as important as other subjects.

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On

the one hand, some people believe that

history

stands as a crucial

subject

to learn due to the following reasons.

Firstly

,

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,

history

ris

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

a reflection of our tradition and culture

.

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.

It makes students aware about their cultural values and

history

about how they came into existence by connecting them with stories of ancient times.

Secondly

,

history

helps them to learn many lessons from the past.

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For

instance

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,

fight of freedom fighters gives them moral about

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the importance

of

independce

freedom from control or influence of another or others

independence

in

ther

of them or themselves

their

the

life.

Therefore

,

history

is considered as

a

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an

important

subject

in a syllabus.

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On

the other hand

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,

others hold

a

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an

opinion

secince

a particular branch of scientific knowledge

science

and technology are most needed

subject

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subjects

to study due to

fact

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the fact

that in

this

contemporary society to compete on

global level

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a global level

the global level

and be successful.

Moreover

,

knowledege

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

of these subjects

are

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is

the norm of the days.

In addition

, these subjects play important role to make any country powerful it is clearly seen that mostly developed invests in

sceince

a particular branch of scientific knowledge

science

and technology more than developing countries.

Hence

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,

these subjects are very important to be a part of global competition. As far as

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

concerned

,

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,

finding out which

subject

is most important and which is least important is a daunting task. I believe

combination

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the combination

a combination

of

both

would be

helpfull

providing assistance or serving a useful function

helpful

for overall development of

student

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the student

students

a student

. So,

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the role

of

both

subjects are same.

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In

conclusion, despite different

peple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

peoples

have

different view

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different views

a different view

.

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.

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think

history science

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history, science

and technology has equal

importantance

both

are supplementary to each others.

to

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To

make

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an integrated course of academic studies

curriculum

curricula

very effecting for students

both

subjects are required.