Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In the today’s world, Celebrities

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are considered

popular for their financial status and

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activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

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of beauty more than their

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trend is impacting the younger generation a lot. I totally agree with

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statement and in the below essay, I would be providing my stance in detail. For the past few decades, it has become too common for the teenagers and adults to imitate the celebrities in whatever action they do, the

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they dress, the body language they adapt as these famous big heads of the society are treated as their role models. From a tiny bath soap to the larger scale costumes like suits and

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a plumbing fixture that sprays water over you

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, every person tries to co-relate himself with the star displayed in the

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a decorative paper for the walls of rooms

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and doing so, the rising stars feel as a symbol of pride.

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, there is a greater extent of responsibility levied on the shoulders of the celebrities in fine tuning the upcoming generations

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perseverance is lacking in the highly respected big shots and has become more of a

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making business rather than educating and

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shielding (or designed to shield) against harm or discomfort

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the admirers in a right direction. Lack of spirit is missing in the minds of the sophisticated people.

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, the competition among the big shots in terms of advertising, acting, sports field has increased a lot in a

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the morale values and objectives has taken back foot and huge

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is spent on costumes and publicizing. Many famous movie artists

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have undergone

face correction surgeries to look more glamourous on the on and off screen than their competitors and earning

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lots

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in the forms of attending

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hosting events, functions, inaugural occasions, modelling etc.

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the companies are utilizing the weak minds of the celebrities and using them for their

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product

promotion

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Young minds without thinking that their heroes and heroines are

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integral part of the society blindly follow them leaving their work and

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a social unit living together

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any specific behavior

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, families ruining their lives and landing themselves

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in

unforeseen circumstances.

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The majority

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at stake because of the

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characteristic of a lack of maturity

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acts of the innocent teenage adults. There are very few celebrities who has achieved

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status by their deeds rather than the look and feel

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, I can conclude that unless there is a change in the psychological thinking of younger minds with respect to celebrities,

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perception, stating

that

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and appearance are more important than the achievements they did will continue to exist affecting the

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

of mankind.