You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell them, where you would like to live. Tell them the type of place you are looking for, etc.

#move #city #work #people #accommodation #type #place

Dear Maria and Marco, How are you?

I’m

glad to announce you that

I’m

moving to Milan in the

three months. I’ve already

recieved

conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers

received

a promotion and my company decided so.

I’m

writing to you to ask for some help with my future

accomodation

making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances

accommodations

accommodation

. My new workplace is near

Porta

port city in northwest Portugal; noted for port wine

Porto

Genova metro station. I really would like to stay there,

although

it is a central zone and it might be more

expansive

high in price or charging high prices

expensive

. In

fact I

Accept comma addition

fact, I

’ve got a salary increase and

I’m

going to put on rent my house here in Sicily.

I’m

looking for a simple one or two-rooms flat, possibly not a ground floor, with fully-furnished kitchen and bathroom, close to a supermarket and close to a metro or bus station. Let me know if you know somebody that rents apartments to whom I can speak to or somebody that currently

loves

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

there and is about to move. All the best Pia

Thu Mar 19 2020

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

154 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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