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You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell them, where you would like to live. Tell them the type of place you are looking for, etc.

#move #city #work #people #accommodation #type #place
Dear Maria and Marco, How are you?
I’m
 glad to announce you that
I’m
 moving to Milan in the
next
 three months. I’ve already
recieved
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
 a promotion and my company decided so.
I’m
 writing to you to ask for some help with my future
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodations
accommodation
. My new workplace is near
Porta
port city in northwest Portugal; noted for port wine
Porto
 Genova metro station. I really would like to stay there,
although
 it is a central zone and it might be more
expansive
high in price or charging high prices
expensive
. In
fact I
Accept comma addition
fact, I
’ve got a salary increase and
I’m
 going to put on rent my house here in Sicily.
I’m
 looking for a simple one or two-rooms flat, possibly not a ground floor, with fully-furnished kitchen and bathroom, close to a supermarket and close to a metro or bus station. Let me know if you know somebody that rents apartments to whom I can speak to or somebody that currently
loves
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
 there and is about to move. All the best Pia

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