You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it,

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Jayesh, Here I am writing you to request to attach at our main

office

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about six months. As I am newly joined to Glenmark Pharmaceuticals Limited and I would like to obtain job training from both

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of Human Resources Department and Information Technology Department. Since no one is available to

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the jobs to me at

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Myanmar

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the Myanmar

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, I still need to work and discuss with Human Resource Partner

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Bhavika to prepare

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contract for

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2020.

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and work closely

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the best way. With regards to my

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Myanmar

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, I will keep in touch with my Admin Assistant for daily tasks.

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, employees from

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can able to reach me via Whatsapp and email as well. I will ensure not to delay any operations from

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, I am wondering that if you could please assist me to get the visa from

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Embassy.

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, please advise accommodation during my stay in Mumbai. I would prefer to stay nearby our

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. Thanks in advance for your support and I look forward to hearing something from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ivy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

200 words

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