The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel
The table data contrasts the use of different means of transportation
according to
the average distance
in two years
, 1985 and 2000.
As can be seen from the table that
car was the most popular mode of transport in both Correct determiner usage
the
years
. The distance
in miles
travelled per person using almost all these forms increased dramatically, except for walking, bicycle and local bus
whose the
figures had an upward trend.
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It is clear that
in 1985, the average distance
travelled by British
in a car was 3,199 Correct article usage
the British
miles
, followed by a rise to 4,806 miles
after fifteen
years
. Moreover
, this
increase was seen in the number of miles
travelled by long
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long-distance
distance
bus
, train, taxi and other modes over the period. For instance
, long
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long-distance
distance
bus
recorded 124 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
miles
, which approximately doubled the figures of it in 1985. As also
shown that taxi was the least popular means in all modes of travel.
The opposite was true for walking, bicycle and local bus
over a period of fifteen
years
starting from 1985 because there is a slight downward of them. For example
, walking stood at 255 miles
followed by a drop to just 237 miles
in 2000. The amount of the
British used Correct article usage
apply
bicycle
has been Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
also
refused to 41
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be 41
miles
after fifteen
years
. Meanwhile, local
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the local
bus
was considerably fall
because the average Wrong verb form
fell
miles
per person dropped from 429 to 274 in fifteen
years
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