These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study there are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

It is undeniable fact that nowadays more and more people are migrating abroad for their better livelihood and lifestyle. But
this
immgration
migration into a place (especially migration to a country of which you are not a native in order to settle there)
immigration
bring
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brings
a lot of hustle and bustle in their life.
This
thesis will assert both pros and cons of the statement in upcoming fragments. According to
first school
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the first school
of thought I deem that people migrate to different countries because they get high wages as they very well know that due to
such
a hike in inflation they
wont
will not
won't
be able to feed their families with less wages.
Secondly they
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Secondly, they
have a better lifestyle in terms of healthcare, education and environment. According to
second school
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the second school
of thought I reckon that migrating abroad comes with some drawbacks as well.
Initially
major problem
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the major problem
is feeling homesick.
Secondly there
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Secondly, there
are several more barriers which
comes
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come
there
of them or themselves
their
way like communication problems, food, environment etc. To recapitulate, after taking these points into deep
considertaion
the process of giving careful thought to something
consideration
without a shadow of doubt I believe that if
government
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the government
will provide all the basic necessities to their
citizens
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citizens, then
then
they will not migrate from on place to another to feed their families.

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