These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study there are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

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It is undeniable fact that nowadays more and more people are migrating abroad for their better livelihood and lifestyle. But

this

immgration

migration into a place (especially migration to a country of which you are not a native in order to settle there)

immigration

bring

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brings

a lot of hustle and bustle in their life.

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thesis will assert both pros and cons of the statement in upcoming fragments. According to

first school

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the first school

of thought I deem that people migrate to different countries because they get high wages as they very well know that due to

such

a hike in inflation they

wont

will not

won't

be able to feed their families with less wages.

Secondly they

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Secondly, they

have a better lifestyle in terms of healthcare, education and environment. According to

second school

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the second school

of thought I reckon that migrating abroad comes with some drawbacks as well.

Initially

major problem

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the major problem

is feeling homesick.

Secondly there

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Secondly, there

are several more barriers which

comes

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come

there

of them or themselves

their

way like communication problems, food, environment etc. To recapitulate, after taking these points into deep

considertaion

the process of giving careful thought to something

consideration

without a shadow of doubt I believe that if

government

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the government

will provide all the basic necessities to their

citizens

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citizens, then

then

they will not migrate from on place to another to feed their families.

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