Poor people and those living in the rural area find it difficult to access university education. University education should be made easy for this group of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today's
modernalized
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word
acquire
Suggestion
will acquire
acquires
all the population of the world to have a good knowledge. So, many people want to engage higher education. The dwells of
surburbs
a residential district located on the outskirts of a city
suburbs
have always difficulty with study. Because they are usually believed to have problems while they want to study. Technology of
nowaday's
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
life can make it more easier than in the past. It means online teaching can help to solve
such
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problems of applications who can't addend the educational process.
For example
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, the method named Moodle can be suitable for them. And
also
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we have another option. The authority of the
universitety
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
may give some
previleges
a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privileges
privilege
for the students of
urgan
relating to or concerned with a city or densely populated area
urban
organ
areas.
For
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example paying
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example, paying
additional salary, giving free library, transportation, free dormitory promotions to them. In my
philosophy it
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philosophy, it
may not only encourage the attendants and but
also
Linking Words
it may cover some living expenses. If the
responsibles
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
try to find opportunities for dwells who came from
surburbs it
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suburbs, it
suburbs it
will give may turn into
fload
fill quickly beyond capacity; as with a liquid
flood
floods
field
of new attendants of the institution.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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