in the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Show advantage and disadvantage

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Looking back, before the boom of technology, there weren't possible to talk with someone on another country or search on
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the meaning of climate change, but as technology started to win the confidence of the population, nowadays is a mechanism that makes our life easier about a lot of situations. Even so,
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can make us dependant
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device
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time that can affect our relations with the people around us. In accordance with
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I consider that
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is an important tool at the point that makes us depends and affect our relationship with our close people.
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I will explain you the reason
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and favour of
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statement.
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,
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the internet
is an important gadget because help our
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lives
and make more simple, without
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, we can't speak with someone in another country or make investigations about thing that we need to search or we want to know about something.
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is a very important point because with the current situation around COVID-19 we supposed to be in our house doing virtual classes, telecommuting thanks to
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the internet
and the different platforms that it brings us to helps us in
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situation of extreme concern.
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, like we all knows,
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absorbs the attention of people,
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is more common in young people, as is a tool that allows us to talk with friends, boy/girl friend, I mean, people that are far from us;
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can affect our relationship with the people who are close to us,
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make connecting with far people and disconnect with close people, losing the ability to interact face-to-face in a natural form with close people,
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is a really big problem in our century. To sum up
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is a huge mechanism that facilitates our lives, but, at the same time might affect our capacity to relations face-to-face and connect with someone who is not on the other side of the screen of our telephone.
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is why I firmly believe that we have to learn to manage
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for the well being of us and don't let that
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manages us.

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