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Expenditure on fast food by income groups of uk in 1900

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The given bar
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 represents the information about the money spent on fast food in the United Kingdom in the year 1900 come average
income
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 and lower
income
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 categories. The Bar
graph
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 higher
income
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 people are spending much money for
hamburger
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 are above 40 and where as
fish
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 chips and Pizzas are spending above 15 Average
income
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 people on fast food
consumption
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 are spending about 30 on
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hamburger
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a hamburger
hamburgers
, up to 25 on
fish
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 chips and about 10 on pizza. In lower
income
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 people spending much on
fish
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 chips are above 15, consuming
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hamburger
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a hamburger
 less than 15 and spending on Pizza are above 5. The line
graph
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 describes the information about the average
consumption
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level
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 of all higher average
,
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,
lower
level
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 and
income
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 groups of
hamburger
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,
fish
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&chips and pizza. Ham burger and
fish
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 chips are in increasing trend, whereas Pizzas were downward Trend. In the bar
graph
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 higher
income
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 and average
income
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 groups are consuming much on
hamburger
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 where as low
income
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 groups are spending much money on fast food as compared to to average and lower
income
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 people. In the line
graph
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 the average of all
income
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 groups
consumption
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level
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levels
 on Ham burger and pizza inclination steadily where as in pizzas are decreasing
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level
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levels
. In all three consuming
hamburger
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level
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levels
 of
consumption
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 is higher as compare to fist&chips and pizzas
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