you have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude for selecting my profile for
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and requesting you to reschedule an interview
on
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other
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another time slot
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time
slot, as I have another
appointment
on
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proposed
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time
. I am excited to be a part of your esteemed institute and complete education in my dream subject. At the same
time
, I like to
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for not
able
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to attend an interview
on
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proposed
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a proposed
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time
slot, as my neurologist
appointment
is on
same
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day. Getting
specialist
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appointment
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is a challenge and it has
long
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waiting of three months. Any change in the
appointment
would defer my medical treatment by a quarter. As
this
is an important interaction for
career
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, so I am requesting you to reschedule it
on
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any other weekday in the same week . I will be able to manage any
time
slot in
entire
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day. It would be highly appreciated, if you provide more insight on the interview pattern like
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of the interaction and topics for the written test
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if it is there.
This
would help me to prepare and perform well. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards Ankit
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