you have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

#interview #place #course #college #appointment #time #admissions #tutor #position #apologise #offer #tests #address

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to express my gratitude for selecting my profile for

course

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the course

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and requesting you to reschedule an interview

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other

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another time slot

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time

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slot, as I have another

appointment

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proposed

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the proposed

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time

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. I am excited to be a part of your esteemed institute and complete education in my dream subject. At the same

time

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, I like to

apologies

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for not

able

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being able

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to attend an interview

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proposed

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a proposed

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time

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slot, as my neurologist

appointment

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is on

same

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the same

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day. Getting

specialist

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a specialist

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appointment

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is a challenge and it has

long

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a long

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waiting of three months. Any change in the

appointment

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would defer my medical treatment by a quarter. As

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is an important interaction for

career

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my career

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, so I am requesting you to reschedule it

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for

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any other weekday in the same week . I will be able to manage any

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slot in

entire

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an entire

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day. It would be highly appreciated, if you provide more insight on the interview pattern like

duration

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of the interaction and topics for the written test

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if it is there.

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would help me to prepare and perform well. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards Ankit

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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