The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the initial year. In the second decade, from 1861 to 1871, it
number
of male and female workers and manufacturing units in England
and Wales
in 10 years
intervals starting from 1851 to 1901. Correct your spelling
10-year
Overall
, number
of factory employees dropped steadily throughout the provided period, Change the article
a number
the number
whereas
males were predominant to females in most years. Besides
, the number
of factories fluctuated but increase
over 50 years. Looking at the table in more detail, in 1851 there were over 477,000Wrong verb form
increased
labours
in Correct your spelling
labourers
England
and Wales
. A significant downward trend was depicted in the total number
of employees and it had plummeted to just 61,000 by 1901. In terms of gender distribution, men outnumbered women except 1861
, when there were over 131,000 men as compared to 160,000 women. Change preposition
in 1861
However
, the gap between two
genders gradually narrowed. By 1901, it became inconsiderable where there were 31000 men and 30000 women workers. Correct article usage
the two
In addition
, a seesaw trend in number
of factories in Change the article
a number
the number
England
and Wales
was observed over five decades. It was only 225 in England
and Wales
inAdd an article
the
dramaticallyincreased
and Correct your spelling
dramatically increased
then
it reached a peak at 722 in 1881. After that, in the last
two decades
it dropped and had only 600 by 1901.Add a comma
decades,
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