Some people belieye lhal leenagers shou,d concenlrole on oll schoo, subiecfs. Bul, ofhers believe fhof leenogers shourd focus on lhe subjecf ihoi ihey ore bes, of or lhol lhey find fhe mosl inferesfing. Discuss bofh fhese views ond giye your own opinion

People are divided on the issue of the

subjects

which teenagers should be required to

study

. Some believe that these young

school goers

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should be made to

study

all

subjects

,

whereas

others say that they should be given the choice of studying

subjects

of their interest.

This

essay shall analyze both perspectives. l, personally side with the former view. I believe that in today's competitive world, a broad

knowledge

is needed to succeed in any field. There are many reasons why some people hold the opinion that

students

should not have to

study

all the

subjects

and should be allowed to choose the

subjects

they want to

study

. They opine that in

this

case

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the

students

will probably be more enthusiastic about their

study

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studies

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. ln addition, if

students

are forced to

study

all

subjects

, they can easily lose interest in education. What is more, if all

subjects

are compulsory for studying,

students

will not have enough time to learn all of them properly;

therefore

they will be constantly under a lot of pressure

Furthermore

, nowadays, the job market is very demanding and the recruiters select

students

who are skilled in various fields. Having the basic

knowledge

of varied

subjects

during

school

time definitely widens the horizons for the

students

. To add to it, it is a well-known fact that most

subjects

are related to each other in some way or the other.

For example

, a basic

knowledge

of mathematics is needed to excel in computer languages.

Finally

, I believe that it is up to the teachers to develop

interest

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of the

students

in any subject.

For instance

, during my

school

days, my history teacher was so good that a boring subject like history was the favourite subject of the whole class.

To sum up

, it can be said that

students

should learn all

subjects

at

school

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level, as they are not mature enough to know their real interests at

school

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level and a broad

knowledge

is

also

needed for their holistic development.