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Aerospace
as per
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namely
it
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is a combination of Aircraft and Spacecraft. It is one of the most important
eld
helped humankind to dominate the skies and
space
above. As per our
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Aerospace
eld
started by
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brother's
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.From 1903 to 2020 world
makes
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to
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too
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much
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improvements in
aircrafts
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,rockets,
satellite
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and missiles.
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eld
is
very
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unique it has
help
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us to go beyond earth, to explore the vast expanse
that is
the
sapce
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space
.
Currently
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we have more than 4800 satellites orbiting the earth and India is a country which made a remarkable contribution to the
aerospace
eld
and
space
research. In
next
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few years
for
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the Indian
space
market will
going to
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be extremely
vigorously
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with
signicant
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significant
growth opportunities. As per other
countries
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our India
is
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also
provide
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the
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higher education system in aeronautical or
aerospace
eld thats
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fields. That's
why in
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scenario the new generation
children
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are eager to learn about
space
. Now in
India
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there are
some
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few amount of government research or organisation
center
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like ISRO, HAL,DRDO etc. but
recent
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years
their
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are
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many private companies or research
center
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in
aerospace
eld
coming
into
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scene
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like SpaceX and Blue
origin
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. Because career prospects for
aerospace
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fields
are always open to innovative ideas or opportunities across the globe.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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