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How to collect water by the method of swing basket and rope and bucket

#water #method #basket #rope #bucket
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The diagrams show how to collect
water
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 by the
method
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 of swing
basket
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 and rope and bucket. As we see, now there are
two
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 methods of collecting
water
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. One of them is swing
basket
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. We use
this
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method
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 to collect
water
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 from one or
two
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meter
Suggestion
meters
 depth. Basically, it is used for irrigating fields by farmers. Swing
basket
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 which is made of bamboo or leather and bind with ropes and it is
catched
discover or come upon accidentally, suddenly, or unexpectedly; catch somebody doing something or in a certain state
caught
cached
 from
two
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 sides by
two
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 people and poured
water
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into
Suggestion
in
 the irrigation
chanels
official routes of communication
channels
canals
canoes
 with their help.
Rope and bucket's
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The rope and bucket's method
method
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 is more difficult than the swing
basket
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. The reason why,
it
it is
it's
 taken from fifty metres deep with bucket who's is
binded
confined by bonds
bound
 ropes
that
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is pulled
Suggestion
are pulled
 by rollers and pulley. That helps to bulls take out the
water
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 to irrigation
chanels
official routes of communication
channels
canals
channel
 in slope.
Thus
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, we can show these
two
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method
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 of irrigation purposes are very difficult and different from each other

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