In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

The bankrupt of numerous small stores in

town

are

occuring

come to pass

occurring

in some nations because of the remarkable growth of

bigger malls

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the bigger malls

outside the

town

.

However

, it is said that

this

development will not only create lots of difficulty for people without

car

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a car

cars

to reach the final destinations but

also

encourage the number of cars being used. But, I still believe that

this

transformation will bring back more pros than cons. It is

easily

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easy

to figure out that the larger the mall is, the more products are sold. Specifically, the large stores will corporate with lots of entrepreneurs and companies in

differents

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

areas from overseas to national, from food and drink to toys.

In other words

, these stores can import not only a huge

number but

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number, but

also

a variety of products to serve their customers.

Therefore

, people will have more choices to buy than in the smaller one.

Moreover

, some large malls outside the

town

is a

complexes

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complex

. To be

more clearly

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more clear

clearer

more clearer

, some will include restaurants or playgrounds to meet the customers’ needs.

Therefore

, people come to these malls just like a trip for their families to escape from the daily pressure and have more time together, or even these large out-of-

town

stores is a place to stop during a long road

trips

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trip

for some families. In conclusion, not only does it sell tangible

products but

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products, but

also

sell intangible one, love and fun between people, correspondingly.

Last

but not least, the purpose of building large malls outside the

town

is to limit the pollution may happen. To illustrate, a large mall

always go

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always goes

with noise pollution since it witnesses the regular and dense of not only the influx of

people but

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people, but

also

the flow of containers come and leave, which will lead to numerous health damages

such

as hard hearing, cardiovascular disorders and high lever of stress

Consequently

, allocating massive stores far from the city is necessary and compulsory to make sure that citizen will be safe. To sum up, the large out-of-

town

store is definitely the best choice for people because of the benefits

its

the thing named or in question

it

provides.