To be labeled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labeled ‘masterpieces’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed.

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The taste of people for artwork has a various of

diversity

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diverse

, varying from person to person. Over the past the millions of years, normal works

is apprised

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are apprised

the masterpieces while the real values are overshadowed. I do absolutely agree with the statement that the quality’s

art

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award is

downturning

discouraging through fear

daunting

. In other word, the quantity is on the rise, but the quality is worse. Modern people seem to be busy to earn money for meeting the standard of living. Aesthetic

art

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forms like sculpture or painting to be extraordinary pieces require the meticulousness and spend a lot of time elaborating. Notwithstanding, artists are ready to hang their

works

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work

on the wall or preserve it into the

art

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galleries without being creative to become a timeless piece of work.

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, Leonardo Da Vinci spent a long time creating paintings worth the thousands of dollars today. It is the underrated and unrecognized things that gradually lose their interests

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. The modern artwork can be appreciated by few or it is hard to comprehend all the meanings

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, the prices for raw materials is increasing. One reason

maybe

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may be

due to lack of real

art

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lovers and admire their talents. As the consequence, the field of

art

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suffered

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suffering

and quality disappear. People are no longer interested in

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art

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the art

anymore. In short, determining the right artwork and awarding those unique works, through the scrutiny is required. It not only motivates the artists create valuable

works but

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works, but

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return the fairness to true

art

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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