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To be labeled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art forms should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century, there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labeled ‘masterpieces’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed.

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The taste of people for artwork has a various of
diversity
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diverse
, varying from person to person. Over the past the millions of years, normal works
is apprised
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are apprised
 the masterpieces while the real values are overshadowed. I do absolutely agree with the statement that the quality’s
art
 award is
downturning
discouraging through fear
daunting
. In other word, the quantity is on the rise, but the quality is worse. Modern people seem to be busy to earn money for meeting the standard of living. Aesthetic
art
 forms like sculpture or painting to be extraordinary pieces require the meticulousness and spend a lot of time elaborating. Notwithstanding, artists are ready to hang their
works
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work
 on the wall or preserve it into the
art
 galleries without being creative to become a timeless piece of work.
For instance
, Leonardo Da Vinci spent a long time creating paintings worth the thousands of dollars today. It is the underrated and unrecognized things that gradually lose their interests
for
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in
art
. The modern artwork can be appreciated by few or it is hard to comprehend all the meanings
besides
, the prices for raw materials is increasing. One reason
maybe
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may be
 due to lack of real
art
 lovers and admire their talents. As the consequence, the field of
art
 is
suffered
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suffering
 and quality disappear. People are no longer interested in
art
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the art
 anymore. In short, determining the right artwork and awarding those unique works, through the scrutiny is required. It not only motivates the artists create valuable
works but
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works, but
also
 return the fairness to true
art
.

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