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The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The best way for governments to solve the problem of
traffic
 congestion is providing free public
transport
 in 24 hours per
day
, and
seven
 days a
week
. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In
this
, highly competitive era of 21st century,
transportation
 has been developed by modern technology. With the passage of
time
, the vehicles are being increased. Countless people have their own bikes and cars.
Thus
, they are driving everyday on the roads.
That is
 why,
traffic jam
Suggestion
the traffic jam
a traffic jam
 is developed. A blends of individuals assert that the prime method for Authority to tackle the issue of
traffic
 congestion is
procureing
get by special effort
procuring
 without any charge public
transport
 in 24 hours per
day
 and
seven
 days a
week
. I will agree with the statement.
To begin
 with, the
first
 and foremost matter is, pollution would be
reduceded
made less in size or amount or degree
reduced
 in the world. It is being
spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
spearheaded
 countless diseases in the human life due to environment has been polluted by vehicles smoking. A number of vehicles are running on the roads.
consequence
Suggestion
Consequence
, public
transportation
such
 as buses and trains have a
wonderfull
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
wonderful
 choice to environmentally.
In addition
, everyone
is using
Suggestion
uses
 their own vehicles daily basis. They are spending of their a part of monthly
incomeas
Suggestion
income as
 well as petrol and
desels
an internal-combustion engine that burns heavy oil
diesel
 price have risen. Public
transport
 should be developed in the society.
For example
, the frequent
breaking
a restraint used to slow or stop a vehicle
braking
 and
acceleratingthe
Suggestion
accelerating the
 vehicles in
traffic
 jams burn more fuel.
Hence
 it is the additional loss.
Furthermore
, another reason is, employees and student
eould
past tense of "will"
would
 be reached with right
time
 at
destinstion
Suggestion
the destination
destination
 because of there are no
trafficcongestion
Suggestion
traffic congestion
 on the road.
Passangers
Suggestion
Passengers
 are being travelled on the lane without any
restitration
the act of restoring something or someone to a satisfactory state
restoration
. For
instrance
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
insurance
, emergency vehicles
such
 as fire brigade and ambulance get stuck up in
traffic
 jams
thst
pointing out something
that
test
case
events that provide the generative force that is the origin of something
cause
 a delay
jn
to or toward the inside of
in
 reaching the location. In conclusion,
development
Suggestion
the development
 of public
transport
 network at economical rate is essential.
rs
Suggestion
Rs
 per
day
, and
seven
 days a
week
. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In
this
, highly competitive era of 21st century,
transportation
 has been developed by modern technology. With the passage of
time
, the vehicles are being increased. Countless people have their own bikes and cars.
Thus
, they are driving everyday on the roads.
That is
 why,
traffic jam
Suggestion
the traffic jam
a traffic jam
 is developed. A blends of individuals assert that the prime method for Authority to tackle the issue of
traffic
 congestion is
procureing
get by special effort
procuring
 without any charge public
transport
 in 24 hours per
day
 and
seven
 days a
week
. I will agree with the statement.
To begin
 with, the
first
 and foremost matter is, pollution would be
reduceded
made less in size or amount or degree
reduced
 in the world. It is being
spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
spearheaded
 countless diseases in the human life due to environment has been polluted by vehicles smoking. A number of vehicles are running on the roads.
consequence
Suggestion
Consequence
, public
transportation
such
 as buses and trains have a
wonderfull
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
wonderful
 choice to environmentally.
In addition
, everyone
is using
Suggestion
uses
 their own vehicles daily basis. They are spending of their a part of monthly
incomeas
Suggestion
income as
 well as petrol and
desels
an internal-combustion engine that burns heavy oil
diesel
 price have risen. Public
transport
 should be developed in the society.
For example
, the frequent
breaking
a restraint used to slow or stop a vehicle
braking
 and
acceleratingthe
Suggestion
accelerating the
 vehicles in
traffic
 jams burn more fuel.
Hence
 it is the additional loss.
Furthermore
, another reason is, employees and student
eould
past tense of "will"
would
 be reached with right
time
 at
destinstion
Suggestion
the destination
destination
 because of there are no
trafficcongestion
Suggestion
traffic congestion
 on the road.
Passangers
Suggestion
Passengers
 are being travelled on the lane without any
restitration
the act of restoring something or someone to a satisfactory state
restoration
. For
instrance
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
insurance
, emergency vehicles
such
 as fire brigade and ambulance get stuck up in
traffic
 jams
thst
pointing out something
that
test
case
events that provide the generative force that is the origin of something
cause
 a delay
jn
to or toward the inside of
in
 reaching the location. In conclusion,
development
Suggestion
the development
 of public
transport
 network at economical rate is essential.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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