The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
water
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consumption and the different fields of using it in six areas of the world.
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, the percentage of
water
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used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic uses
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varied in different parts of the world;
for example
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, the major proportion of consumption in Africa, Central
Asia
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, South East
Asia
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, and South
America
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contributed to agriculture.
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in North
America
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and Europe,
water
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was mostly used for industrial purposes. Regarding agriculture, Central
Asia
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consumed 88
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of its
water
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for
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aim, which is the most compared to the other areas. Agricultural consumption was 84 and 81
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in Africa and South East
Asia
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respectively.
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,
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intake for South
America
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was 71
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,
whereas
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agricultural
use
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was the least in North
America
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and Europe compared to the rest of the groups. When the highest percentage of industrial
use
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(53%) was for Europe and North
America
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had the
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-largest proportion among all categories, the rest of the groups have the least industrial
use
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ranging from five
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for Central
Asia
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to 12
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for South East
Asia
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;
furthermore
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, in the case of domestic
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, all the percentages were relatively similar changing from 7 to 19,
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South
America
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has the highest
use
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(77%) and Africa alongside
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South East
Asia
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have the lowest share.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia, america, percent, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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