People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

People, for the time being, frequently use the World Wide Web and rarely communicate with each other;
however
, overall I think it is more a beneficial growth than negative because virtual communication is an inevitable change
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people's life
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Main
reason
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reason, such
such
changes
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technologies that have been rapidly changing since earlier the twenty-
first
century,
therefore
when was created a virtual space named the internet; it was made everyday life easier and comfortable, thereby quickly gain popularity of society.
Secondly
, the obvious reason for the popularity virtual
area
is providing wider opportunities for communication.
For example
, people via Skype, Viber or other software can always stay in touch with friends, relatives, or collaborators from different countries.
Moreover
, social sites allow finding like-minded people around the world and help people with agoraphobia or other problems speak with people around the world.
Furthermore
, business via invention new type of shops expand the borders for sales that have a positive impact on an income, and
this
commerce makes life customer easier.
For example
, eBay famous everywhere because it has manufacturers from different countries.
However
, people cannot decline the online
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has
the drawbacks, and
first
is dangerous because
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having
many new type frauds that labelled now the cyber crime.
For example
, World Wide Web has many viruses that can control personal computers, or stealing your private information or, even, money from a credit card.
Moreover
, the internet much time is used for bullying and in other dirty goals.
For instance
, youth tend to post offensive posts about people who less popular or weaker in their opinion.
Besides
, a society notices what people who use online
area
frequently catch in some type addicts afterwards have less interest in study and work. To conclude, presently people live in the era technical progress,
therefore
they cannot ignore advantages that provide new technology.
Moreover
, a society can evade all drawbacks if use the internet carefully and enhance security for users.
Therefore
, I believe what a virtual
area
is beneficial evolution with many opportunities for everybody.
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