You recently returned from overseas by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter: Describe the item you left behind, say why it is important to you, explain what you would like the airline manager to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring to your notice that I left my laptop

bag

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on the plane- Air Asia T437 while flying from Dubai to India on 21st March

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2020. I was carrying a laptop

bag

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and forgot to take it with me after reaching my destination. It is brown in colour and has a small sparkly keychain. My laptop is placed in the

bag

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and it is of the brand MacBook Pro, 16-inch model of silver colour. There are plenty of personal photographs and

work related

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documents which are confidential are stored in the device.

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I have insurance, it is significant to me as it is the

first

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item I purchased with my initial salary. So, it holds

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sentimental value to me. I would like to request you to allow your staff to search for my

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the flight. If found, kindly give me a call at 321-4567-456. I will be waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Vijaya

Sat Mar 28 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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You recently returned from overseas by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter: Describe the item you left behind, say why it is important to you, explain what you would like the airline manager to do

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

People are surrounded by advertising. Advertising can influence what people think So it has negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?