You recently returned from overseas by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter: Describe the item you left behind, say why it is important to you, explain what you would like the airline manager to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice that I left my laptop

bag

on the plane- Air Asia T437 while flying from Dubai to India on 21st March

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2020. I was carrying a laptop

bag

and forgot to take it with me after reaching my destination. It is brown in colour and has a small sparkly keychain. My laptop is placed in the

bag

and it is of the brand MacBook Pro, 16-inch model of silver colour. There are plenty of personal photographs and

work related

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documents which are confidential are stored in the device.

Although

I have insurance, it is significant to me as it is the

first

item I purchased with my initial salary. So, it holds

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sentimental value to me. I would like to request you to allow your staff to search for my

bag

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the flight. If found, kindly give me a call at 321-4567-456. I will be waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Vijaya

Sat Mar 28 2020

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8 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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