The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the percentage of the household revenue expenditure for

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food,drink,housing,clothing and entertainment in five countries.

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, the percentage of the spend food,drink and housing

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, clothing and entertainment are really low compared to others.

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and Spain spend more money on their food and drink at %36 and %31 respectively. They are more than UK and

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housing percentage of france %31 fermany % 33 and UK %37 respectively. But

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and Spain least than three countries. The tables illustrate that the proportion of

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entertainment and clothing are noticeably low in five

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and Britain

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pay money %11 and %10

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with the expenditure other three countries which

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13 and %19. Europe spends very little money

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clothing.

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but Germany at %15,

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at %11 and

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at %12 are coming back to back.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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