The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables
shows
the percentage of the household revenue expenditure for Change the verb form
show
disbuse
food,drink,housing,clothing and entertainment in five countries.
Correct your spelling
disburse
Overall
, the percentage of the spend food,drink and housing were
on Correct subject-verb agreement
was
avarage
the same Correct your spelling
average
Whereas
, clothing and entertainment are really low compared to others.
According to
table
, Add an article
the table
Turkey
and Spain spend more money on their food and drink at %36 and %31 respectively. They are more than UK and france
. Change the capitalization
France
in addition
housing percentage of france %31 fermany % 33 and UK %37 respectively. But Turkey
and Spain least than three countries.
The tables illustrate that the proportion of the
entertainment and clothing are noticeably low in five Correct article usage
apply
country
Change to a plural noun
countries
Turkey
and Britain were
Change the verb form
was
lovest
pay money %11 and %10 Correct article usage
the lovest
comparison
with the expenditure other three countries whichChange to a plural noun
comparisons
%
13 and %19. Europe spends very little money Add a missing verb
are %
for
clothing. Change preposition
on
Specially
France and Spain Replace the word
Especially
almost
Add a missing verb
are almost
same
but Germany at %15, Correct article usage
the same
UK
at %11 and Correct article usage
the UK
Turkey
at %12 are coming back to back.Submitted by englishwithpleasure2006 on
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