Task 1 the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the current -making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The provided information about

the

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apply

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how

cement

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is produced by following different steps and

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

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for producing concrete for making buildings is depicted by the given diagrams. Glancing at provided illustration, it can be seen thoroughly, in the case of

cement

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production, a large amount of limestone and clay is collected.

Then

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, it is crushed for receiving the mixture

as

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in

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a

power

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powder

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form.

Afterthat

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, it is mixed in a rotating heater.After heating,

this

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mixture is

grinded

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ground

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and

cement

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is produced.

following

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this

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,

this

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cement

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is put into the bags for

selling

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. Having a quick glance towards the production of concrete,

firstly

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, 15%

cement

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and 10%water are mixed in a bigger chamber.

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, only 25%sand and 50%gravel like small pieces of

stones

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are used

to

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in

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this

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process. Interestingly , after mixing these materials,

concrete

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the concrete

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mixture is done for using building purposes and making homes.

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, all the steps are very essential for both processes. If one of the

step

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steps

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is omitted,

then

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the entire process will be

halt

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halted

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.