The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
These data sources clearly communicate the graduation of Canada’s students in the 1992-2007
period
.
Looking first as a whole, there are two distinct trends. Firstly
, the number of females and males share similar rising trends, finishing with their highest level. In addition
, the figure of
females is always far higher than males.
With respect to the number of graduates in females, Change preposition
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initially
, 100000 students graduated, before following a volatile pattern around
105000 people in the 1995 - 1998 Change preposition
of around
period
. After that, the figure rocket
throughout the Wrong verb form
rocketed
next
9 years, reaching its peak, at 148000 which was the highest overall
.
As for the data of
males, it was identical to Change preposition
for
female’s
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females
one
in the first 2 years Correct pronoun usage
apply
period
, from 70000 to 78000 students in
1992 to 1994, respectively. After that, it oscillated around 72000 people between 1995 and 2001, followed by experiencing burgeoning growth, ending the Change preposition
from
period
by hitting a high of 95000.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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