Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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Science
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subjects play an important role in higher education, but it is noticeable that students choose
science
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subjects in college are less than ever before. As far as I am concerned,
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phenomenon is closely related to the economic development and social changes, bringing potential negative influence on our society. Over the past decades, it is widely acknowledged that choosing
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as ma
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a major
s easier to find a well-paid job than other subjects, because a great number of ma
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manufacturing
manufacture
ack manpower with abundant
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knowledge. Due to the ra
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rapid
conomic development, students don’t need to worried about income so they can choose the subjects according to their hobbies
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of just future careers. Naturally, it is easily deduced the reason why not enough students choose
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subjects.
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, our society witnessed ma
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massive changes
a massive change
n different aspects, including information technology, lifestyle and economic structure. Obviously, learning
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subjects ha
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has not guaranteed
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salary
nd companies need employers with other skills rather than just
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.
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, people can seek a job in different fields and their social
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and literacy skills can be utilized as well. Indeed,
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brings
bout some benefits. People can choose what they love as their major and will utilize th
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their potential as well
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, I must emphasize that
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and technology is
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he basis of a country. Without strong high-tech companies and industries, there is no doubt that it is un
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totally unlikely
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angerous, due to the fact that they have to rely too much on other countries. At the same time, without sufficient people majoring in
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, it is very difficult to develop our high-tech industries.
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, we should not abandon
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subjects in
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niversity. In conclusion, the economic growth and ma
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massive
ocial changes result in the phenomenon that students don’t tend to choose
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subjects.
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, we should not neglect the potential detrimental influence of our society due to the importance of
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knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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