The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
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different education levels in the UK in 2010.
Women predominated
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schools for children.
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was particularly true, having over 95 per cent in
nursery
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and over 90 per cent in primary school as female teachers Men and women were equally represented in teaching institutions regarding older children: secondary
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and colleges. Colleges were 50 per cent male and female.
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, men held a larger number in higher level education institutions, particularly true for
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with twice as many males
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teaching staff than female

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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