The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about how much various countries
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electricity
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2014. As we can see, the highest 2 countries of
electricity
generation were China and USA ( 5398 , 4099 respectively ). Russia came
third
, where it produced two times that of Germany ( 526.60 ). Korea produced the least
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electricity
among the group ( 485.1 ). Japan produced slightly higher than that
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India. The quantity of
electricity
produced in France and Brazil were close ( 564 and 530 respectively ) In terms of usage, It follows the same pattern of production, where China and the USA dominated the group ( 5322 and 3866 respectively ). Followed by Russia ( 1038 ) and Japan (856.7) . It is noticeable as well that all countries can cover their needs of
electricity
with the exception of Germany, where it used more of about 50 billion
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than its production. Korea still
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the lowest amount of
electricity
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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