The diagram above shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given
pmicture
a visual representation (of an object or scene or person or abstraction) produced on a surface
picture
depicts the working of the
water
pump
powerd
(often used in combination) having or using or propelled by means of power or power of a specified kind
powered
by the energy obtained from the sun. Overall, it can be seen that the process of
water pump
Suggestion
the water pump
is a very
comlicated
difficult to analyze or understand
complicated
,
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,
involving many stages
,
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,
starting from solar
panel
to
water
supply to
village
Suggestion
the village
as a final stage.
Firstly
,
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,
solar
panel
collect
Suggestion
collects
solar energy from the sun.
Photovoltaic
cells connect with the solar
panel
,
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,
which
is converts
Suggestion
converting
solar energy to DC power.The DC power generated from the
panel
is linked to the bore located inside the underground bore or well. After that
,
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,
water
level in the well is higher
ratherthan
Suggestion
rather than
the bore pump.The bore pump allows
water
to pump out and stored it into the
water
tank.
Finally
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Finally, this
this
water
tank distributes the
water
to
village
Suggestion
the village
villages
a village
.
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