do you use technology to communicate with your friends?

Absolutely yes; the
technology
and
internet
are growing up that I think in the future we should do the majority of our
activity
Suggestion
activities
by
Suggestion
of
the applications and some softwares
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
wish
we would have in our
pc
Suggestion
PC
or laptop. As we see in Iran;
for example
about the traditional taxies that these days they become extinct because of
progressive of
Suggestion
progressive technology
technology
and
majority
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the majority
of people are
transfer
Suggestion
transferring
by SNAP. But I think companies and big stores have to pay attention to the advancement of
technology
and especially
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. If a company doesn’t care about
internet
it would be
destroy
Suggestion
destroyed
; companies have to follow the
technology
and
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
advancement to improve their performance. But by myself with
internet
Suggestion
the internet
and
technology
I do better my works and it takes me lower time to spend and with lower cost too. I have a lot of groups and channels in the social network and it is an easy way to communicate and talk with each other.

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