Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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There is issue with visiting cultural and historical sites by local people. The reason of
this
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is
awareness
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aware
of local people and aim of tourists to know about
history
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and
culture
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. The educational trips and making interesting events for citizens can solve
lack
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the lack
of visiting. The main reason is
different awareness
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a different awareness
between tourists and local people about
history
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and
culture
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. For tourists, the basic goal is to learn about that new place and to understand its
culture
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and traditions. The visiting museums and sites are
easiest way
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the easiest way
to realize it.
On the other hand
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, local people have been living in that place and got about
cultural
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culture
cultures
and
history
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in the school, university and ordinary life.
Therefore
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, for citizens these things are not new and something exciting.
As a result
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, tourists visit sites rather than citizens.
However
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,
trip
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a trip
the trip
organized by educational program and cultural activities
are
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is
able to increase number local, who visit
sites
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the sites
. Students will get more detail information
in
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on
these trips, and there is a chance that students will be more interested.
Then
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, holding events at sites will
interests citizens
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interests, citizens
,
furthermore
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, they will have a fun and know more by
activities
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the activities
.
For example
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, the New Orleans and Brazil have made festivals a lot of years. It keeps traditions, national identity and all local people participate
on
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in
these events. In conclusion, tourists want to get about
history
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and
culture
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by visiting historical and cultural sites, when local people already have known about it and do not oft
visit
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visited
museums. It is possible to encourage local by cultural events and
promotion
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promoting
from school, universities and government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Take for granted
  • Economical constraints
  • Routine obligations
  • Programming
  • Cater
  • Engagement
  • Community involvement
  • Personal connection
  • Cultural relevance
  • Discounts
  • Sense of ownership
  • Interactive exhibits
  • Local traditions
  • Field trips
  • Cultural bond
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