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With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?

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In the modern era, most of people eating
junk
food
 and some people eat regularly and
junk
food
 can cause many
health
 issues. While, other people think that the only solution is to ban it completely than, people
can’t
 eat fast
food
.
This
 essay is in agreement to the given statement and shall discuss
reasons
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the reasons
 for my support in
upcoming paragraph
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the upcoming paragraph
 before presenting a logical conclusion. Lately, people are living in fast and modern lifestyle era, and sometimes they are eating fast
food
 on
streets
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the streets
 and they enjoy it. Street
food
are
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is
 very famous in all cities. But, most of young generation people eating too regularly and they
don’t
 know what are the causes of eating
junk
food
. Sometimes it’s affect on our
health
 and some people died due to eating fast
food
. Appropriately, eating
junk
food
 too much is not good for our
health
 and fast
food
destroy
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destroys
 our
health
. Most of fast
food
 maker
use
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uses
 low quality products to prepare
this
 kind of meal.
Moreover
, fast
food
become
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becomes
 dirty and full of
germs but
Accept comma addition
germs, but
 some young generation people
can’t
 understand and they are always eating
junk
food
. Many people
don’t
 have knowledge about
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 negative impact on
human body
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the human body
. The consumption of fast
food
 has increased rather than a past time and these days, fast
food
don’t have
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doesn’t have
 enough nutritional values and vitamins. So, our body
can’t
 get enough nutritional values and vitamins. If, people
can’t
 eat
fast
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fast food, then
fast food then,
food
 than, they
can’t
 have
health
 issues. The best way to reduce eating fast
food
 is the media can capture the whole process of preparing
junk
food
 and publish on television.
This
 will make individuals healthy and fit.
However
, some people
don’t
 have enough time to cook their meals at their home than, they are eating
junk
food
. They believe that “ fast
food
 is good for our
health
 and they
also
 eat different types of meals.” They
also
 suggest that fast
food
make
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makes
 life easier because they
don’t
 waste their time on
cooking but
Accept comma addition
cooking, but
 they
don’t
 know about they lost their
health
 and they waste their money on
junk
food
. To conclude, always eat homemade
food
 because it’s a healthier
food
 and it’s made by our family members. Homemade
food
have
Suggestion
has
 enough nutritional values and vitamins. Homemade
food
 is good for our
health
 and human body.
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