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With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?

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In the modern era, most of people eating
junk
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food
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 and some people eat regularly and
junk
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food
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 can cause many
health
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 issues. While, other people think that the only solution is to ban it completely than, people
can’t
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 eat fast
food
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.
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 essay is in agreement to the given statement and shall discuss
reasons
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the reasons
 for my support in
upcoming paragraph
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the upcoming paragraph
 before presenting a logical conclusion. Lately, people are living in fast and modern lifestyle era, and sometimes they are eating fast
food
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 on
streets
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the streets
 and they enjoy it. Street
food
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are
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is
 very famous in all cities. But, most of young generation people eating too regularly and they
don’t
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 know what are the causes of eating
junk
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food
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. Sometimes it’s affect on our
health
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 and some people died due to eating fast
food
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. Appropriately, eating
junk
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food
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 too much is not good for our
health
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 and fast
food
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destroy
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destroys
 our
health
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. Most of fast
food
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 maker
use
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uses
 low quality products to prepare
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 kind of meal.
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, fast
food
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become
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becomes
 dirty and full of
germs but
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germs, but
 some young generation people
can’t
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 understand and they are always eating
junk
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food
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. Many people
don’t
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 have knowledge about
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 negative impact on
human body
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the human body
. The consumption of fast
food
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 has increased rather than a past time and these days, fast
food
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don’t have
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doesn’t have
 enough nutritional values and vitamins. So, our body
can’t
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 get enough nutritional values and vitamins. If, people
can’t
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 eat
fast
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fast food, then
fast food then,
food
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 than, they
can’t
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 have
health
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 issues. The best way to reduce eating fast
food
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 is the media can capture the whole process of preparing
junk
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food
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 and publish on television.
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 will make individuals healthy and fit.
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, some people
don’t
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 have enough time to cook their meals at their home than, they are eating
junk
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food
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. They believe that “ fast
food
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 is good for our
health
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 and they
also
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 eat different types of meals.” They
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 suggest that fast
food
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make
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makes
 life easier because they
don’t
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 waste their time on
cooking but
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cooking, but
 they
don’t
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 know about they lost their
health
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 and they waste their money on
junk
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food
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. To conclude, always eat homemade
food
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 because it’s a healthier
food
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 and it’s made by our family members. Homemade
food
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have
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has
 enough nutritional values and vitamins. Homemade
food
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 is good for our
health
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 and human body.
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